Jaden Salami's Portrait Improvements

       Overall, good work. However, there are some things we can work on...
       For the lighter in studio one, I would remove any accessories such as watches and rings. Also, the brighter nail polish colors are sort of distracting, so maybe cover those up. I don't know how nail polish works though, so if you can't just cover it up, it is not that important. Rate 8/10.
        For the in studio that has the orange background, try to get your models more in focus. Also, Sierra and Gabi's eyes look closed. I would crop the left side of the photo so you get rid of the excess orange light. You should tell your models where to look, since some of them are looking at the camera and some are looking away from it. Rate 6/10.
        For the darker in studio, turn Gabi so she is facing inwards. Also make sure that they are all in focus. Not to beat a dead horse, but make sure to take off the jewelry. Rate 7/10
        For the green in studio, just make sure to not cut off the feet or move the photo up in general. Cover up the logo on Lizzy's pants. Also you might want to not have socks in it. Rate 7/10.
        I would not change much for your out of studio pictures. They are actually pretty good. Rate 9/10.
        In conclusion, your project has potential. If you fix some of the little things, this should be an easy A. Overall project rate 8/10.